1) Confirm your production brief. You write this yourself but it's absolutely crucial this is clear, appropriate and achievable. You should have done this already - the original blogpost was here - but it may have changed as a result of your preliminary exercise.
Our production is a cinematography music video for the song Meek mill ft Future Jump out the Face the song.The song is a rap song that is very high tempo so our story line fits it.We created a story line of 3 young black males who rob a bank and have a lot of money.They decide to lay low for a couple months so the police dont detect anything suspicious.When one member doesn't agree with this but carries on with it.So a couple a weeks later the police arrest him and is put into custody and is told he must tell them where the other bank robbers are and if he does give up their location he is then a free man.
The man gives up the other two members location and they are arrest.the other man who had as deal with the police is free to go and goes back to enjoy the piece of his money he saved.The other men are interrogated by the police however they are let go as there wasn't not enough evidence.Then when the 2 men leave the police station they are given a note and it tells them where the other guy is who told the police on them.They pay him a visit at his new home.While this happening we have scenes where the 2 men are performing the song.
2) Research: notes on at least THREE similar texts to the one you are creating. What are the key conventions? What can you learn/borrow from the examples you have looked at?
50 Cent-21 questions
This music video is a similar text that we are creating as the song is performed in video.But theirs a story to it many slow motions as the man is arrested enters jails and wants to know if his girlfriend is still there for him and still loves him.There is a narrative to the music video his struggles being in jail and his girlfriends still being out there for him.There was a problem is got resolved and through all the way through the audience watching saw the hero as 50 cent even though he went to jail.But we just wanted to him be happy and be with his girlfriends.Also when the song is being performed it is not slow motion but with the other acting scenes its is slow motion.
50 Cent- Many Men
This music video is similar to what we want to try and recreate for our actual production. This music video shows many negative representations throughout the video and reinforce many existing stereotypes.The opening minute of the video shows 50 Cent being shot by another black man, this reinforce the stereotype that black men are criminals and involved in guns and drugs. A lyric that 50 cent says in his music video is "you better watch how you talk when you talk about me cos I'll come and take your life away" It is evident from this lyric that 50 cent is promoting this violent behaviour. This reinforces stereotypes once again. The music video also includes women, wine guns etc. This can be linked to the stereotype or generalisation that black rap/hip hop music videos objectify women showing them half naked and being sexualised by men simply for the 'male gaze'.
Obie Trice - Snitch ft. Akon.
This music video also shows similar representations showing the whole idea of black men being criminals. In the video the four friends are robbing a bank which is stereotypical of black males. However what was strange was that the music video showed a short footage of Eminem (A white man) spraying the CCTV so they are able to rob the bank without being identified, this doesn't show the general representation of white males.This music video once a gain has a narrative as they rob the bank and they are happy,then one of the members get caught and make a deal with the police to catch the rest.Then they get released from jail and they catch him,this is the good ending every wanted to.Even though it wrong the music video showed obie trice and akon as the hero throughout.
3) Project schedule: when will you film and edit this production?
We defiantly next and then carry it on through out the half term holiday.Hopefully we can finish finish in the holiday and then started editing by then.
4) Treatment
1) Robbers running to safety
This will be the opening scene where we will be able to see the three robbers running away with heavy bags. In this scene the robbers will get to a safe location (dark road or back road) where they will try to catch their breath. When the robbers get to safety they eventually start to panic because their getaway driver is late.
2) Robbers get into the getaway vehicle
Eventually the getaway driver pulls up and they quickly get inside the car, the driver moves off very quickly and leaves the location. Now that the robbers have escaped and they are all safe they take off their masks and begin to celebrate. The robbers have managed to complete their mission and now that they are all happy they got money, the leader of the group suggest that they should all lay very low for a few months, The other robbers aren’t very interested as they are both focused on spending their money.
3) One of the robbers (snitch) gets arrested
In the next scene (New day) one of the robbers who will turn out to be a snitch begins to spend all of his money buying expensive clothing and jewellery, as he is walking out of a shop towards his car he looks to his left where he notices that the police are closing in on him, eventually they arrest him and put him in the back of the police car. Meanwhile, the other robbers are in a chicken shop not knowing what’s going on.
4) The snitch is an informer
In this scene the informer will be getting interrogated by police and we will be able to see that he is looking scared. Straight after this there will be a shot where we will see an undercover cop slowly driving past the chicken shop (Where the robbers are) as he looks intensely in the shop whilst the other robber (informer) is sitting at the back. Then the police officer points at the robbers and the other robber (Informer) nods his head as he confirms their identity.
5) *Rapping scene*
There will be 5/6 shots of the rappers
6) The other two robbers get arrested and get interrogated
In the next scene the first robber will be coming out of the shop and gets arrested as soon as he comes outs and then gets put into the back of the police car, then there is another shot of the second robber getting arrested. In the same scene the two robbers are getting interrogated by the police. However they are reluctant to speak.
7) They come out of prison
In this scene the two robbers beat the chargers as they had good lawyers. Then they walk out of the police station in relief and as they are coming out of the one of the robbers get a text message with the snitches location. Then the two robbers are sitting at the back of a car in anger.
8) *Rapping Scene*
9) They confront the snitch.
Lastly, the car pulls up next to the snitches location where they wait outside for a while, they then go into the house and raid it and then one of the robbers kick the door open and the snitches face change in shock.
5) Storyboard - sheets available in DF07 or you can use this AQA storyboard sheet.6) Shot list - use Microsoft Word or a template like this to help you.
Shot No.
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Shot Type
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Shot Details
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Timing (Seconds)
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1.
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Medium Shot
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Dark road
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2
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2.
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Medium Shot
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Robbers running with money bags
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3
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3.
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Close up
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Robber with mask running
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2
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4.
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Medium Shot
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Robbers run around the corner
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3
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5.
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Over the Shoulder
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Robbers talking
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3
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6.
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Close up
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Robber out of breath as he talks to others
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4
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7.
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Medium Shot
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Quiet road
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2
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8.
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Medium shot
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3 Robbers talking and panicking
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4
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9.
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Medium shot
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Car pulls up
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3
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10.
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Medium shot
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Robbers get in the car
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2
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11.
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Close up
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Wheel spin
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2
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12.
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Medium- Close up
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Robbers in the car celebrating
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3
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13.
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Medium shot
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Car drives off quickly
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2
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14.
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Close up
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Robber takes off mask
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2
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15.
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Medium Close up
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Rest of robbers take off their masks
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2
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16.
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Close up
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Robber smiling
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1
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17.
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Medium close up
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Robbers talking about laying low
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4
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18.
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Close up
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Other robbers reactions on laying low
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2
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19.
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Medium shot
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Some of the money on the floor outside
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2
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20.
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Medium Close up
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Robber kisses the money in joy
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2
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21.
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Medium Shot
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They all laugh in relief
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2
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22.
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Long- Medium shot
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Robber comes out of the shop with a chain
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3
|
23.
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Medium shot
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Robber walks over to car
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2
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24.
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Close up
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Robbers reaction as he looks to his left
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2
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25.
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Medium shot
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Robber tries to run as cops close in on him
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3
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26.
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Medium Shot
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Cops grab him
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3
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27.
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Medium shot
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Cop puts his hands behind his back
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2
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28.
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Close up
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Robber hands in handcuffs
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1
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29.
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Medium shot
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Cop walks him to the car
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3
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30.
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Medium shot
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Rest of robbers sitting talking in a chicken shop
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3
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31.
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Medium shot
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Robber half smiles in disbelief
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2
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32.
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Medium Close up
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Cop pushes him in the police car
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2
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33.
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Medium shot
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Remaining robbers sitting in shop laughing
|
2
|
34.
|
Medium close up
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Cop pulls up, looks intensely in a shop
|
3
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35.
|
Medium close up
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Arrested robber is sitting in the car
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2
|
36.
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Long Shot
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Chicken shop
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2
|
37.
|
Medium close up
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Robber looks into the chicken shop (snitches)
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3
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38.
|
Medium close up
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Cop points at robber coming out of the shop
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2
|
39.
|
Close up
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Snitch nods his head
|
2
|
40.
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Long shot
|
Rapping scene
|
2
|
41.
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Medium shot
|
Rapping scene
|
2
|
42.
|
Medium Close up
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Rapping scene
|
2
|
43.
|
Close up
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Rapping scene
|
2
|
44.
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Medium shot
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Rapping scene
|
2
|
45.
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Long shot
|
Rapping scene
|
2
|
46.
|
Medium shot
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Robber 1 gets arrested by cop as he comes out
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3
|
47.
|
Medium close up
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Robber 1 walking to the police car
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2
|
48.
|
Close up
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Robber 1 getting in the back of the car
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2
|
49.
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Medium shot
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Robber 2 walking with cop 2 to the police car
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2
|
50.
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Medium shot
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Robber 1 sitting on the table getting interrogated
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3
|
51.
|
Medium close up
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Robber 1 not paying attention looking at his hands
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2
|
52.
|
Close up
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Robber 1 says ‘no comment’ (slow motion)
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2
|
53.
|
Medium close up
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Robber 2 big sarcastic smile on his face
|
2
|
54.
|
Close up
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Cop pushes robber 2’s head aggrressively
|
2
|
55.
|
Medium shot
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Cop talking to the robber
|
2
|
56.
|
Close up
|
Cop starts shouting at the robber
|
2
|
57.
|
Close up
|
Robber 2 crossed arms
|
2
|
58.
|
Medium close up
|
Robber 1 looks up at cop in disgust
|
2
|
59.
|
Medium shot
|
Robber 1 and 2 get out (good lawyers)
|
3
|
60.
|
Long shot
|
Robbers walk past police station
|
2
|
61.
|
Long shot
|
Robbers in the car driving
|
2
|
62.
|
Medium long shot
|
Car drives by
|
1
|
63.
|
Medium close up
|
Robbers talking in the car (about snitch)
|
2
|
64.
|
Close up
|
Robber gets a phone notification
|
1
|
65.
|
Medium close up
|
Robber 1 looks at robber 2
|
2
|
66.
|
Close up
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Notification is a text of the snitches address
|
3
|
67.
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Long shot
|
Car drives by a quiet road
|
2
|
68.
|
Close up
|
Robber 1 clenches his fists in anger
|
2
|
69.
|
Medium close up
|
Drivers mirror of robber 2’s eyes
|
2
|
70.
|
Medium shot
|
Car driving by
|
1
|
71.
|
Long shot
|
Car turns
|
1
|
72.
|
Medium shot
|
Rapping scene
|
2
|
73.
|
Long shot
|
Rapping scene
|
3
|
74.
|
Long shot
|
Rapping scene
|
1
|
75.
|
Close up
|
Rapping scene
|
2
|
76.
|
Medium close up
|
Rapping scene
|
3
|
77.
|
Long shot
|
Rapping scene
|
2
|
78.
|
Close up
|
Rapping scene
|
2
|
79.
|
Medium shot
|
Car slows down
|
2
|
80.
|
Close up
|
Car wheels stop
|
1
|
81.
|
Medium shot
|
Car is stationery
|
1
|
82.
|
Close up
|
Door number is shown
|
2
|
83.
|
Medium close up
|
Robbers have a quick word
|
2
|
84.
|
Close up
|
Robbers lips talking in slow motion
|
3
|
85.
|
Close up
|
Robber grabs door handle and pulls it
|
2
|
86.
|
Medium close up
|
Robber 1 steps out the car
|
2
|
87.
|
Close up
|
Robber 1’s shoes stepping out of the car
|
2
|
88.
|
Close up
|
Snitch at home smiling
|
3
|
89.
|
Medium close up
|
Robber 2 steps out the car
|
2
|
90.
|
Medium shot
|
Snitch pouring champagne in glasses
|
2
|
91.
|
Close up
|
Robber 1 put on gloves
|
2
|
92.
|
Medium close up
|
Robber 1 closes his car door
|
1
|
93.
|
Medium sot
|
Snitch drinking with chains on looking flashy
|
1
|
94.
|
Medium shot
|
Robber 2 closes his car door (built up tension)
|
1
|
95.
|
Medium shot
|
Snitch talking to his friend as he laughs
|
1
|
96.
|
Close up
|
Champagne glass on the table
|
1
|
97.
|
Medium shot
|
Robbers talking with gestures on the plan
|
3
|
98.
|
Medium close up
|
Robber 1 nods as robber 2 is speaking
|
2
|
99.
|
Over the shoulder
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Robber 2 speaking as robber 1 looks serious
|
2
|
100.
|
Medium close up
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Robber 1 points at the back of the house
|
2
|
101.
|
Medium shot
|
Robbers separate in different directions
|
2
|
102.
|
Medium shot
|
Robber 1 jogs off
|
3
|
103.
|
Medium close up
|
Robber 2 goes around the house
|
2
|
104.
|
Medium close up
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(flashback shot) snitch smiling with other robbers
|
3
|
105.
|
Close up
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Robber shoes landing after jumping a block
|
2
|
106.
|
Medium shot
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Snitch laughing as he high fives his friend
|
2
|
107.
|
Close up
|
Robber 1 kicks door open
|
3
|
108.
|
Medium close up
|
Snitches face changes in shock
|
2
|
109.
|
Medium long shot
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Robber 1 stands in anger looking at snitch
|
2
|
110.
|
Close up
|
Champagne spills on the table
|
2
|
111.
|
Medium shot
|
Robber 2 comes shortly after behind robber 1
|
2
|
112.
|
Medium close up
|
Snitches face is in fear
|
2
|
113.
|
Long shot
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Robber 1 & 2 stand there with tensed faces and fists
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Casting details
Robber 1:Abdiasis
Robber 2;Mansour Mansour
Robber 3:Ahmed Ismail
Police officer 1; Jawad John Charles
Police Officer 2: Abdiashakur Hassan
Props and costumes:
Balaclava
black hoodies
Robe
Gym bad
Fake money
Handcuffs
Police badge
Car
chain
Champagne class
This is could be the place for the first scene where they just robbed the bank and they are waiting for the gateway car
This location could be where the 2 other robbers chill and they order food and they are arrested by the police because the informant told them they were here.
This location is Westfield shopping centre and so this can
be the scene the informant gets arrested after doing some shopping.
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